Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Lorame
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LYRICS

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A word from you 
Isn’t enough this time
I walk away 
I leave it all behind
See, I can’t believe
You feel the way you do
Unless you give me something
I know is true

I know you’re scared
I know you’re lonely
But I can see past the lies
To start it again
I would give anything
But I also believe in Goodbyes
Here’s Goodbye

A plead from you
Would make things much more clear
To know you care
About what happens here
See, I can’t believe
You feel the way you do
Unless you give me something
I know is true

I know you’re scared
I know you’re lonely
But I must see some cries
To start it again
I would give anything
Anything

I know you’re scared
I know you’re lonely
But I can see past the lies
To start it again
I would give anything
But I also believe in Goodbyes
Here’s Goodbye

© 2011 Lorame


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Posted 13 Years Ago


This really touched me. Actions do speak louder than words. I like the style in which you wrote some of the stanzas, mixing and matching- as if you were trying your best to give the other a chance to do something to keep the relationship going.
Really good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love the flow of it and say its really good. great job...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Would definitely make a wonderful song..

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really feel the emotion coming off of this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago



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