To you

To you

A Poem by Lorame

It burned me and shaped me
Like a fire burning bright
Then the flame all died out
And I was left in Night
Without you and your love
Washed away by the rain
I’d lost all I dreamed of
I was left with my pain
The rain came and destroyed
Not cleansing or reviving
Each raindrop was like glass
Now all was about surviving
When the rain finally stopped
I still found no relief
I was gasping for breath
I was heading towards death
The last agonizing gasps
I was thinking of you
You in the bright sunshine
And then I was there too

© 2010 Lorame


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wow. so beautiful. like a sunset from the beach of you love's reunion. very wonderful piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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