Only Forever

I was breaking up inside

I told you

My tears are the broken pieces 

Of my heart

You caught them 

Held them in your hand

Put everything back together

And said to me

I will be here

Only, only

Only Forever

I was feeling so lost

I asked you

What am I supposed to do now 

With a whole heart

You held it

Wrote your name on it

Sealed it with love against all weather

And said to me

I will hold it for you

Only, only

Only Forever

Reviews

[.::Pancake Fairy::.]

Very nice. I really enjoyed the comparison of tears and broken pieces, so true. This is a beautiful piece about finding love again.
You really know what love feels like in all phases of it. lovely poem :)

[the in between]

sounds a bit like a song. overall very nice what stood out to me was the whole first stanza :) very nice. One thing I would suggest is starting the poem with the last stanza and ending it with the first because it'll end stronger.

[Abandoned_Night_Dreamer]

A very nice piece, it flows well and the use of repitition makes it even better, I cannot see any flaw in this piece whatsoever :D

[Kena]

No other word but PERFECT! :)

QC said it! You really highlight the sweetness of love. Great job!

[QC]

This is great. You write about love wonderfully. (:

[Kate Hunter]

nice job. I like the way you word things. It really hits the reader with your emotions.

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully composed, like a heartfelt symphony..