Fire

The fire burns bright, the fire burns strong.

My heart cannot resist its power for long.

A light has been kindled, my soul now has wings,

There’s no way to ignore the feeling it brings.

I sense its flame spreading, the fire grows.

Even the deepest shadows are filled with its glow.

My heart was calling for it, yet how did it start?

What was it that brought the fated first spark?

The moment our souls met, I felt my heart turn.

This fire is called Love; may it always burn.

Reviews

[Im His Daughter]

good job on this one.. I like it

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

mystic..and creative i like your vibe,

keep it up,
good work :D

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a beautiful unique way to describe how you feel when your soul connects with your soul mate. The flow of this poem is an easy smooth read. the words you picked in this poem paint a picture in the mind. Great job on this poem. I love the very last line in this poem

[ChristianM]

Wow. This played like music as I read it. I was feeling pretty tired and frustrated from writing but your poem has lifted my spirits.
:)