You

Tonight I watch as the ground is shifting and breaking beneath me.

It seems I’ve reached the moment when all finally falls apart.

I am standing on the brink, and nothing is as it was to be.

The world falls down around me, and I feel brokenness in my heart.

Time and again I have been here; many times as I’ve stood here alone,

I’ve spent hours wondering if it’s best to take the plunge or hold on.

I look to the sky, I search through my heart, but all seems made of stone.

It’s hard to find answers when what I found joy in appears to be gone.

But this time, I find there is still a light and all is not as it seems.

I can feel you holding me, you are the strength on which I can stand.

You show that there’s more in my heart than shattered hopes and broken dreams;

There is still the love that saves me as I feel you holding my hand.

Reviews

[Shade Teller]

On the fifth and sixth line I was a little confused about the rhythm at first but was able to go on and get the rest. I liked how you rhymed every other line as well

[there is no more from m..]

this is verrry well written i loved it

[Hollywood]

Very well written, I liked it. :]

[Micah_s5]

I really liked this. I thought it was well put together and well worded.