The moment we enter the world...

The moment we enter the world...

A Poem by J. A. Lucero

The moment we enter the world
A memory out of reach
Our delicate digits curled
And tiny voices screech
Bright colors and odd shapes
These images sinking in
First soft caress and harsh scrapes
Test driving our delicate skin
Mother's love and Father's protection
A finite shield taken for granted
Sprayed by the world with infection
Old and new perspectives transplanted
Tawdry desires succumb to necessities
Panaceas become second nature
Mother Nature's rest at ease
Until we see the rest of the glacier

© 2013 J. A. Lucero


Author's Note

J. A. Lucero
A lot of people I have shared this with have asked me why I repeat some words, I did that on purpose. If you think it works and you like it then I would love to hear what you like about it, if not I would love to hear what you think will help me improve it :)

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You poem is really one of the best poems I have read today.
It discovers and experiments on a variety of things.
The line :
"Mother's love and Father's protection
A finite shield taken for granted"
simply makes the poem sparkle like a diamond! Very nice!

Please do come and read my poems too! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. A. Lucero

11 Years Ago

Wow that's so kind of you to say, thank you :) I'll definitely take a look at your work :)
Shivam Murari

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :)



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Very good, it rises the question if we remember our first day on earth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. A. Lucero

11 Years Ago

Thanks Anika :) And that's definitely one of the questions I wanted to make clear, I'm glad you got .. read more
You poem is really one of the best poems I have read today.
It discovers and experiments on a variety of things.
The line :
"Mother's love and Father's protection
A finite shield taken for granted"
simply makes the poem sparkle like a diamond! Very nice!

Please do come and read my poems too! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. A. Lucero

11 Years Ago

Wow that's so kind of you to say, thank you :) I'll definitely take a look at your work :)
Shivam Murari

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :)

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J. A. Lucero
J. A. Lucero

San Diego, CA



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Hi, my name is Josh. I haven't been writing for too long and I'd like to know if I've been getting better or worse. I write down what I feel. It may not make sense to you, but whether it does or not .. more..

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