Loose

Is it me?
It must be.
I look the same,
So it seems.
My gaze drips disdain.
My eyes lost their gleam.
I look down.
My feet look…similar.
These are not my shoes.
I’m wearing some poor girl’s
skin and it feels so loose.

Reviews

[J Johnson III]

Touching words. "These are not my shoes" My favorite line.

[Lookwithinsight]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[Lizzie Mitchell]

no matter how few lines you write, your poems always overflow profoundness
great job

[Lookwithinsight]

yay (:! this makes me happy

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

I love this. It's so I can feel it and I feel like that you know?

[Lookwithinsight]

Yeah I gotcha. I'm glad you can. It would suck if no one could relate.

[SEO]

The last two lines are stellar. The concept of wearing someone's skin and it's loose fitting is a really cool image. There's a lot of feeling and emotional depth to this poem

[Lookwithinsight]

Thanks a lot. Yeah it's crazy but I'm sure everyone's felt like this.