Black and Blue

I know what’s right for me.

I should take it.

I know I’ll never be without temptation.

If that’s not the worst ache then,

I don’t know what is.

I bite my tongue until I taste blood.

You feel a lot like love.

I know, I should feel it too.

Somethings holding me back,

it’s turning me black and blue.

Reviews

[Nitesh Mahabal]

nice honesty in this piece of work. mental thoughts were well described. Great work Maam

[Lookwithinsight]

yay (: Thank you for your input!

[RileyRedding]

Heartfelt. Gripping. Emotionally honest. This is great work. Keep on writing!

[Lookwithinsight]

yes! You do too!

[Lookwithinsight]

thank you :] Glad you like it!

[Lizzie Mitchell]

Your poems are always so full of emotion that the reader can feel with you.
Love this

[Lookwithinsight]

(:! I try. I hope the reader can feel it almost first hand you know? Emotions ain't nuttin to mess wit