Winter

A poem I wrote in my creative writing class about personifying the seasons.

A vision of death in a long black coat

An old sad man with a tickling throat

He has yellow teeth like day old snow 

And icy blue eyes that glint and glow.

Translucent skin - frozen to the touch

A cold hearted man that doesn't smile much

With a nose that's pointed and cold like ice

And silvery-white hair the colour of mice.

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Good alliteration. The poetic form works well in my opinion.

I'll have to read more from you