Lets see what this is

Lets see what this is

A Poem by Emily
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I see the pain in your eyes and all I want to do is take it away from you, 
A happy life is what you deserve my love
Whether with me by your side for the long haul or not, 
Your happiness is what matters to me, 
Your happiness makes me happy, I love you enough to be okay with the fact that I may not be the one. 
I may not be the woman who makes your dreams come true, 
I may not be the person you trust completely, but I trust you. 
I trust you to not hurt me, 
I trust you to keep my heart safe, 
You know the pain I've been through, 
the hurt people have caused me. 
I trust that if we don't work we will still be able to be best friends. 
This could last forever or this could be a trial run. 
But I can't keep fighting it, 
We have to see what this is. 
We have to explore what that kiss meant. 
There was a connection from the day I met you, 
We've both been through tragedy, 
We've both gone through major health scares in life. 
Lets see what this is....
 

© 2018 Emily


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Emily
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it is one sad poem to read so emotional but i like the smooth flow of words and the clarity of the message

Posted 6 Years Ago


Talking of trials and tribulations in poetry, a difficult task but also making sure it relates back to the idea of selfless damn near unconditional love, impressive. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Best Regards,
Austin

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anticipating the future. Thinking of what could be, or what could go wrong.It is a fine thing to put the happiness of another before that of your own. I enjoyed your poem.

Best wishes

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I think maybe, just maybe that's what true love is, wanting someone elses happiness even .. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

That is selfless love Emily, not easily found.

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Added on April 13, 2018
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