The wicked

the wicked also have hope

The wicked, falling in love,
Straying more and more,
From the wickedest ways,
Loving loudly, while speaking softly,
Now.... The sinners ways, are coming to an end,
And their praying,
holy father God help us on our way through the valley, of death,
But if we sway, it may be, our final breath,
As the demons ponder over the skulls of the fallen,
We make it through the night, with God on Our back,
Saying, holy father, help us through the trials, of unrighteousness,
Rising from the ground, the heartless, with new hearts,
Working their way out, of the demons den,
Rising to the clouds, their raven wings take new Shape,
That of a dove, the symbol of love.

Author's Note

I wrote this with a beat of a song so tell me if you like the way it's written, thank you for taking the time to read the poem! :)

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a really great write and yes you can really feel the rhythm, the beat is strong and it flows effortlessly
Bravo my friend! :)

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review!

[Freesearch 101]

Its very compatable and has nice flow. I say go for it. I'm inspired!!!

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review of my poem I'm glad you liked it!!

[WolfyZara]

I think it's saying it's hard to be in love. There's a lot of obstacles and hardships. In the end love wins. I really like this poem

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review!