Mistake

Mistake

A Poem by Lonesome Traveler

 It has been seven days

Since I last talked to her

Oh those harsh days

That should have been better

 

Before happened what I did

We shared everything

But much has been said

From my dreadful breathing

 

All I wanted was to have her

but as soon as it happened

Everything began to differ

and I want it all to mend

 

It has been seven days

Since I made that small mistake

Now I'm finding ways

to forget her, and it's hard to take

© 2009 Lonesome Traveler


Author's Note

Lonesome Traveler
I'm really sorry for grammar problems... and some of those are forced... coz i can't think of anything to write.. XD

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Ya there are sum grammar problems but its a good poem. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 28, 2009

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Lonesome Traveler
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Parañaque, NCR, Philippines



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Hey people! Lonesome Traveler here! Nice to meet you! I'm not really an author, not really a writer.. I just do this if i had the inspiration to do it! (Admin don't delete my account!) I love po.. more..

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