Metaphore of Me

Metaphore of Me

Upon the path that I chose,
so many questions had arose,
About my Love and of my Life,
Will God above send me a Wife?
Will our world ever see Peace?
I questioned my Soul and my beliefs,
What in this world will become of me,
and when I pass on will I be set free?
Free from the chains that had burdened me,
Free of the pains of how I came to be the man I now see?
Upon the path that I chose,
so many questions had arose,
The anwser was there right under my nose,
So I searched my soul right down to my toes
I had to expose into the air,each and every layer upon layer,
Scattered were the answers in the questions everywhere...
Too much pain my mind was getting hot,
was it all in vain,so I stressed alot,
Some how, I just had to connect the dots,
awoke in a cold sweat,alone in my cott,
Then the answer became clear to me,
it lifted my burden and set my soul free,
Live life to the Fullest,be all you can be,
Do the best you can with what you can see,
Forget the past because it won't last,and just be Happy...

Reviews

[Vaishali..^_^]

nice..!!it was really beautiful..:)
thanks for sharing..

Vaishali^_^

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Nice end rhymes and a very strong and powerful message. Great write.

[Sam Severn]

Soulful n' simple n' composed like a rap verse! "Too much pain my mind was getting hot, was it all in vain,so I stressed alot, Some how, I just had to connect the dots..." I can feel the beat, beat, beat of your words n' the rhythm of your thoughts banging around inside your skull when I read this!

Super-excellent, LonelySoul! :)

[Voice11]

I think this a very nice simple poem. All the "O's though in the middle could be changed but I get how it reflects on your life. Great write!

[The High Poet]

Wow such a great personal poem and no one has reviewed it yet :) I get to be the first :) I just loved it! Very easy to read and has a great flow to it. You ask a lot of questions that I think many people have pondered. Thanks for the read request