Confused

Life can be confusing, who will understand.

Life can be confusing

No one will understand me

why I don't like tea

the things I say or wear

how I put up me hair

how I talk, walk, smile

I wish someone would see once and a while

Society will judge you, with there lies

they don't see you, so I won't cries (idk I tried)

as I try to find my way

will any one see me today?

They don't understand when I say life is rough

you cannot always be so tough

it may not be hard for me

but for others who cannot see

These roads they fall apart

you can't always be smart

don't tear apart the hearts

of the people who cannot be smart

life is a word problem so hard

you'll always have to be on your guard 

society will knock you down

you'll be staring at the bigg clown...while lying on the ground

I can beg, plead, and cry

I won't ever die

Life can throw bricks at me!

Some will never see!

I am stronger at the heart,

I won't fall apart

I'll help you up, bring you to my level

you won't visit the devil

you can cry cry cry

but you won't die die die

you'll drowned in you sorrow

and regret it all tomorrow

So life may not make sense yet

but look further and see that you'll make mistakes you'll regret

but not today

maybe someday 

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Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is great Taylor, it almost sounds like a rap. Life can be so harsh at times and it feels that no one understands us and no one cares but there is always someone out there who does care. You just keep being you and keep writing you have a talent for it.

[Taylor]

Thank you... :3 I'm not really one for poems... I'm more... and musical or speech person... maybe

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :) Well you have a talent so keep it up.

[Emily Feret]

Sounds like some sort of slam poetry lol

I can tell that maybe poems are not your first love, but this was a good read

[Taylor]

Yea thanks. :3 yea not exactly my first thing.. I'm more of a song writer :) But thanks :3

[Jessie]

This is so sad :( but beautiful in its own strange little way... :)
Its kind of hard to follow, perhaps its because it's written in a pattern i'm not used to. But thats totally okay too!
I like it!

[Taylor]

thanks... I tried something new... I was just like rhyming and stuff lol

[Jessie]

Its lovely ^_^
Don't ever be afraid to try new things!