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A Poem by Lonely Bunny
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A bunny watches a little girl grow up to be someone bitter.

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I nuzzled into her
As the little girl pet me more
She watched as I startle
At the bitter voices through the door
My fur became wet and her arms held me tighter
“You can feel it too, don’t you?” 

I waited in her room
As her heart grew sour 
All I could do was watch
As her bitter words gained power
To her scared lonely life, at least
She now had bid adieu

I kept myself hidden 
As her bitter voice 
Rang through the door. I stood there as a witness
As her life succumbed to the noise
Oh, but what could I ever do? 

I could nuzzle into her one last time
 My cold fur wet again from tears
Then I heard a voice- like bitter honey
A final embrace, oh so familiar
“I lost myself and now you too, bunny”
………………………………………………………….

© 2024 Lonely Bunny


Author's Note

Lonely Bunny
A bunny watches as a little girl turns bitter because of her environment.
The last line of the final stanza was not written because… the bunny died.

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This is so sad to read. Why did the Bunny die?
Was it by heartbreak, neglect or just old age?
The poem touched me and is so beautifully written.
Bitterness can rob us away of all our precious things in life.
I loved and appreciated your message, absolutely.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lonely Bunny

5 Months Ago

Bunnies unfortunately have quite short lifespans. Add that with a very sad environment to live in, t.. read more
This is such a sad poem. The saddest I've read all week. I feel sorry for the bunny.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lonely Bunny

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the review, Relic. I’m glad I could stir up some feelings. Please don’t worry, tho.. read more
Really a heart touching poem. I love bunnies. Nicely written poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lonely Bunny

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much for the kind words. I’m a fan of bunnies myself :)

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Added on June 8, 2024
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