my past

poem about how i felt during the nine years of abuse from my step father

the feeling of loneliness consumes me

morbid thoughts of suicide run through my head

with every blow the misery gets worse

drags me down till i can no longer feel

the threats become worse day by day

it's remarkable i'm still alive

everyday the peril grows

waiting for my last breath

overpowering hate surrounds me

the strikes get worse each time

the damage unbearable

so sick and tired of the suffering

Reviews

[Susan14]

this is amazing and so true to life that i really could relate to it, it has emotion put into it this is so good, everyone can relate to it some time in their life, you should write more like this soon, i can't wait to read more of your stuff, keep up the great work, i just can't wait to read more of your work, keep up the great work