Babe I love you

Well One day you go home and everything is there and you say what the who stuff is this and he is behind you and she says guess who and then he realizes that he wanted her to move in and they have been together for years and he had a long day a work and he was surprised to she her and she said "I Love You." So he was silent and then he said I don't want to be with you I need to be with you FOREVER and she starts to cry and she said when a guy says that....  YOU know that maybe it will be true and it will happen if you believe and she said "I LOVE YOU FOR YOU and no one can change that."  I LOVE YOUU 2 Babe.

Reviews

[Taylor]

I hate this writing it s so long and I need a new one but I thought of a song that you all might think is funny but we will see

[Bare trees]

You have such nice sentiments in this story but your writing skills diminish its value. That is one of the longest run-on sentences I've ever read. You didn't do much work on this and unfortunately it shows. I think you can do better though. Good luck.

[lolliPop(;]

Awwww(; Love you Taylor(;

[Taylor]

Doesn't make sense but it is my first writing and making more tadahhh