Lavender Ramsey travels with her friends to Disney, but, unexpectedly, they arrive in California, where Lavy meets the depressive, sensitive aspiring writer, Brooke Thompson, who gave up his career.
ignore grammar problems, please! I'm not a native speaker!
I also would like some feedback on terms of metaphors, dialogue, and narrative structure.
This is the start of my first novel
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My name is Laura Navarro and I'm a thirteen-year-old Brazilian aspiring writer and award winning poet (I've been listed as a finalist in a poetry competition in 2012, with the poem "Filosofia")
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