Love me

Love me from beneath your shielded core

From where you have never felt it before

Replace your deepest fear

with unrelenting passion

 

I want you to take me with all my entirety

Inhale me and fill your body with all of me

Fingertips against fingertips

Feel it as we ignite, as it rips

Placing my soul upon your lips

 

Ever loved so

Extremely, profoundly, intensely?

When dreams become reality

Where every second you want to be

A part of me?

It’s the way I love thee

Reviews

[Insight "MH"]

Surrendering to love, is the most passionate thing to do. That was so lovely and so delicate. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

Insight.

[Aries1984]

I love it how candidly you wrote this. There is beautiful passion in this poem that I wish people who write about love today (especially in songs) would understand that you don't have to be so graphic when writing about romantic love. It's okay to be detailed but you can still write the piece in that of a way that is just as hot and just as passionate when it's written beautifully. BTW. How did you get that kind of a font? Did you copy and paste from Word?

[Lola_Bee]

Aries thank you so much for the beautiful comment, haven't written in ages! need to find my inspiration again

[Aries1984]

I know. I'm in the same spot with practically no time to write. Thankfully I'm in my final class, and once I'm finished with school I'm gonna spend a bit more time writing and shooting photography.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

you put the image in the readers mind. It is just so profound and such a lovely read! Great job!
Lola you have talent!
Keep up the great work,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lola_Bee]

Ah C. Lee Battaglia once again such encouraging words :) thanks for reading and making my expression worth while. Glad you enjoyed it

[C. Lee Battaglia]

No problem at all Lola!

[ANTO]

I loved that way...once...long ago, LolaBee. You wrote every last drop of it masterfully here. It was a great time of my life and you gave a taste of its splendour here. I hope you love them like this forever.
Bravo dear poet.

[Lola_Bee]

Thank you Anto, its not easy to love so deeply, you expect to be loved the same and evryone does not know how to express such love even though they feel it. Thanks you for always reading :)

[ANTO]

you're welcome.