You’ve Pulled the trigger

When the butterflies turn to tears

You have  admitted all my fears

I am no longer who I thought I was

You’ve cut me deep, can you see my scars

you see it all

And yet you let me  fall

 

Each memory that made me smile

Each moment I  thought worthwhile

Has turn to dust

For your selfish lust

 

trying to put my trust in you just takes so much out of me

Heavy thoughts sift through dust and makes me flee

My love has turn to poison which intoxicates my soul

Where my heart lays you’ll only find a hole

Sadness dissipate

and turns to hate

 

finally I’m glad you are my past

New love never happens fast

But when it does it will be real

what once  lost I will again feel

 

When you open your eyes and begin to figure

That I was the one, the only one

It will be too late, for you have already pulled the trigger

Reviews

[ANTO]

a really good poem Lola - the hurt is palpable throughout and the resilient end is a knockout !
Bravo

[Lola_Bee]

How sad to only read this lovely review now, thanks you for your lovely comment

[DoormanDan]

The level of emotion that emanates from this poem is staggering. This is truly a magnificent poem you have written here!

[Lola_Bee]

aw thank you doorman, im glad you enjoyed it. im even more glad that you think highly of this piece :-)

[The Brooklyn Nomad]

nice rythm and wording. I could really understand what you were writing on, well done

[Lola_Bee]

thank you so much, the fact that you understand my expression and emotion is beautiful :-)

[themystwritings]

really impactful writing here

[Lola_Bee]

thank you so much.

[ThackeryBinx]

Deep, sad, and intimate. Your style is flows easily and is something I can actually understand. Lola you should move to South Texas, there are some good people there. lol just saying. Keep up the great work.

[Lola_Bee]

Thackery how i miss your wonderful reviews, this one doesn't disappoint one bit. im glad you enjoy and understand my dear heart. wow South Texas sound adventurous and Amazing, im sure there are some good people there as you are surely one of them