SHADOW

A shadow I see when I read his words eloquently

We are not familiar, I peek inside his life through the tales that he tells

His strength is becoming

Entwined in the words, my short dalliance with imagination

 

An intriguing daily elixir

of thoughts and emotion plated to mere paper

paper that would be a muse and evoke halcyon on the eyes

as the letters unfold we realize,

how our demure souls attract the wise

 

The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon

Fret not, for we have a common ground and soon

his pen will hit the paper as he invites the world to dinner

Poetry Inadvertently imprinted on the souls of each of us

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon - Fret not, for we have .. '

Distance is such a lure!

Poetry in motion here, set so intelligently - warm to the eyes and ears. Temptation romps in the words: 'We are not familiar, I peek inside his life through the tales he tells..' Your phrases positively reach out perhaps to cast your own net.

Fine, fine writing.

[Lola_Bee]

Thanks emmajoy, I'm really glad you've enjoyed it. such a wonderful review.

[All I See Is Blood and ..]

This is an amazing write. Good job

[Lola_Bee]

thank Emily, glad you enjoyed it

[A. Amos]

Well written piece of art, I have written on same tittle....

Keep creating the magic my friend, well done!

[Lola_Bee]

Hi A.Amos, thank you so much, i will check out your piece

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend...and you're most welcome to readmy humble work!

[AprilRN1210]

words have the power to enchant, enamor, hurt, stimulate, heal, etc.. I am constantly in awe of some of the talent on this site and the effect that their "words" have on me.. you portray that very well here... the emotion, the flow, the phrasing, and the imagery are exquisite.. we share our souls in our writing and sometimes it does leave its mark on others.. beautiful thing when that happens.. I really enjoyed this.. well done!..

[Lola_Bee]

thank you April, glad you enjoyed reading. I can tell you feel the same :-) poetry has really given a way to express myself in my own time and own space and with like minded individuals.

[jennifer little]

nicely flowed poem said with great passion i liked it i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work

[Lola_Bee]

Thank you Jen, appreciate you taking the time to read

[Nikki]

Very well expressed! :) Enjoyed.

[Lola_Bee]

Thanks Nikki, glad you enjoyed it

[Nikki]

You're welcome. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love it when poetry, the words, is the real attraction---
it is more than written on the page, yes, it is imprinted on the soul...

jacob

[Lola_Bee]

Yes Jacob and felt by the heart

[wordman]

this is really a great write it portrays two people the writer and the reader getting drawn in
like a web full of emotions and maybe a secret love

[Lola_Bee]

Thank you, i really enjoyed writing this short piece, your interpretation is correct. The secret love lies in the words the writer writes and how it can impact upon another in such a way it did the reader.