What I See

What I See

A Poem by Loki
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A comparison of pessimism and optimisim.

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Why do i try to fathom an aparrition of other's view

people speak of the beauty of of nature, the sunlight glistening over the tops of trees swaying in the wind.


but all I see is a tainted, twisted, coil of death scraping the dreary sky.


Calm waters,setting sun, and soaring birds. These elements put warmth into the hearts of the ignorant.


What i see is a dark fog settling down on the soulless, still black sea. Crooked crows cry out a story of pain and sorrow as they lay waste thier lives siting in a dimension of decaying time.


As time ticks forward the memory is forgotten. People change and time changes people.


What amazment a child has staring down roaring waters, beautiful large waterfalls


Why is it that i am submittied to a dark pool of madness swirling deep into a pit of firey death?

I see death, war, hatred. I see the world for its' truth.


wise man once said "Murder is as if man has pourd blood deep into his own eyes, changing the world around him.


The sun becomes the moon. The breeze becomes the fog. Time stands still and your tainted soul is corroded.


Until the heat hase been cleansed with tears one can not see their illusion once more, only truth.


The truth is a lie, the lie is the beauty, the beauty is horrid. Life is an ilussion. breaks down your body and decends your soul heart and mind.

© 2015 Loki


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Just a bit of editing and you'll be set; I like the descend and the dark images.
Cheers.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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