Lovespell

I want to stay

To know you more

I want to stay
And listen more to your stories

Oh I love them all
I love our late night calls

I want to stay
I want you to tell me more about your day

I want to stay longer
So I can tell you everyday to take care

But the longer I stay
The harder it hurts

It hurts seeing you wait for her
It hurts seeing you trapped in her lovespell

It hurts that I'm not the one you need
It hurts that I met you a little too late

It hurts to wish that I am her
Cos it's a wish that God should not hear

But God, please a little bit longer
Maybe he'll have a change of heart in a little bit sooner

~~

S.

Author's Note

06-05-2023 I say goodbye to thee. You take care, always. Cos in this world where we never meet, I'll love you in my own way, in a distance, and in silence.

S.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

With love, we do need hope.
"But God, please a little bit longer
Maybe he'll have a change of heart in a little bit sooner"
The above lines. I have known and thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ken e Bujold]

a very good poem. simple construction allows the angst of voice to ring loud without undue interference of becoming too busy. As my first read of your work S, it is a fine introduction. look forward to reading more

ken

[Chris]

The sadness is - if you never speak the other will never know and perhaps they may feel the same thing. We don't choose whom we love, just whom we like.

[Betty Hermelee]

You really want something you cannot have, which makes it all the more frustrating for you...love isn't always equal.... especially when you love someone and he is already involved with someone else......two choices: move on and find another person or wait for him and perhaps this relationship will falter...
Nice Write!
Thank you for you message
Best, B

[Akinlolu]

Torn in two. A cruel thing to want what you can't have. Although at times, you've got to let go of what's good before you can access the best. But how painful it can be to let go. Wishing you the best all the same.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Very good poetry...

Sounds Heart-felt...

I hope you find the one, sister.

Be safe!

Blessed be!!!

[Throwing Romeo]

Romance only breathes loves unfulfilled desire.
Well done.
R