Before

Before

A Poem by H
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Saint Paul, MN

"

Innocence

Laughter

Freedom

 

Curiosity

Ambition

Simplicity

 

Things of my past

Never again to be

 

Lovely memories

Nothing more

 

Lost people

Broken smiles

 

Become my present

My loneliness

 

Despair

Remorse

Guilt

 

Pain

Sorrow

Tears

© 2010 H


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Hi Heather,

the impression i receive is one of walking through a warehouse of good things that are leading to sad lettings go .. turning off the lights section by section until there's only light at the end where all the sadness is.

very expressive and very sad .. you express so much in so few words .. bless you :)

~Faith~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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