Unfinished

Saint Paul, MN

I've got a tourtured soul

A broken mind

Clipped wings

So I cannot fly

 

But I saw a glimpse of hope today

I saw your eyes beyond a cloudy sky

Eyes that shined forgiveness

Eyes that said I love you

 

I got lost in the city lights

I let the warmth embrace me

And I was all alone

Me and the beautiful lights

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh how sweet..
yes times we think like the whole world is closing on us and we just could not breathe
like we are falling so down blow and no hope of ever going up again..
i always thought..i really mean it,love could conquer all..even if in fantasy
i ve always did this,believe it or not..just imagined someone,who never knows
but really would take your mind off..and dream all you like with her
i really think love is the strongest power on earth..none can stop in its way
even with my tortured soul and broken mind i always thought i could survive
suddenly a glimpse of hope i saw,for i saw your eyes behind a cloudy black sky
eyes laughing to me saying you are mine,my eyes drifting for a while and i lost my way
in the city lights embraced me while i was all alone ,me and my beautiful lights
lovely write ..

[xXx]

sounds like coming home after a long journey and seeing the city that will always welcome you in .. this feels of hope and gentle surprise, contentment. as always an awesome honesty in your feelings that lets the reader stand beside you .. precious gift of the writer .. nice :)