Rehab 1

Wayzata, MN

Are you really dying?

Can I die with you?

Lovers intertwined

In a maelstrom of Despair

We're not even moving

Neither forward or back

We can die together

And never be apart

Take my hand in yours

Kiss me softly on the lips

Tell me of the future

It's burning in your eyes.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

those words told a lot..though sad
when we are not moving,then its like i die
would love to die with you..so afraid i die alone
take my hand kiss my lips,let me feel life for once,again
tell me of the future for all that comes to me is the past
just loved your burning eyes..at least i so so much life there..take me
that was wonderful..every words had lots of meaning behind
its never late to live..its too early to die..i will always say
lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Every line is strong and with a purpose. Could feel the emotion and desire. I had to read again. A outstanding poem.
Coyote