Goodbye

This is how the first domino falls

You push one and the rest soon follow

Maybe this is why I feel so hollow

Can't explain why all of these things

Wish to make that jump

Soar through the air till I hit the boulders below

Build your wings strong

To go with the wind

Take you beyond the rocks below

People will try to take you down

Dodge them as best as you can

They will cut you down to nothing if possible

Make you less than yourself

You are a survivor

One fall

and you lose it all

Your life starts now

Follow your dreams

Cut the sorrow from your soul

Let happieness flow through your viens

And kiss your worries goodbye

Reviews

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

I like this, i was always told if someone is trying to bring you down it's because you are better. It's easy to fall down, getting up is the hard part. But letting people get to you is worse, the biggest strength someone can have is getting through the worst and still standing :) Thank You, i loved this.

[Laura Storm]

This is beautiful. It has a great truth behind it. It's so easy to be torn down and so much harder to get back up. Amazing advice.

[~ Twilight~]

i like the idea of the poem...well done:-)

[Wretched Knight]

CA+JIforever, enjoyed it! Lets soar!

[luna11]

I love this poem. I love the message of it and I love the flow and rhythm.
Well written :D
xx

[Rekain]

I love this! Truthfully it's that kind of attitude that everyone should have no matter what. Life's hard enough without others trying to make it worse.