Que es?

Que es?

A Poem by Sin Nombre
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It's in English :D

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One thing

One something

One substance


What exactly is it?


It’s something we use in order to live

To survive

Food and water come to mind


It's something we use in order to prosper

Something we cherish

Happiness and families come into roster


But is that really it?

No?

Then what?

Questions

Questions

Questions


It echoes in your mind

bouncing around in circles

A bat screeches as it checks the sky

Searching for an answer

Attempting to locate it in your endless cave


The dog sniffs and snuffs

Running to what seems to be it

But only to end up with a nose full of lost hope

7:20 droops on the dog as it returns back to its routine of sniffs


Curious yet?

Curiosity can be dangerous,

it did kill the cat ya know?

But curiosity is what brought us to the moon

Maybe you will find what you’re looking for at the end of the rainbow.

I don’t know

Keep being a supertramp

You’ll see

© 2016 Sin Nombre


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Very detailed and keeps you guessing. In the line "it killed the cat ya know?" maybe you could say "did you know it killed the cat? or something along those lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem! I like the imagery, especially about the dog sniffing. Maybe keep the theme of the one thing specifically throughout the entire poem. Maybe more imagery in the beginning, but I think it's good the way it is, just a suggestion

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Sin Nombre
Sin Nombre

MIchoacan, Mexico



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