I enjoyed this poem. It was very nicely written. I do agree with this, because as Katie said, the past is the past, you can't do anything to change it, and you have no idea what the furture is going to bring, so it's pointless to worry about that. Live in the present, and enjoy the good memories you have. Even if you think life is bad now, someone somewhere does have it worse, and things will get better. This was very good.
This was a very lovely poem. I like the message involved in it, and it was written very well. I very much agree with the whole 'live in the moment' catch it has to it. I loved it.
I enjoyed this poem. It was very nicely written. I do agree with this, because as Katie said, the past is the past, you can't do anything to change it, and you have no idea what the furture is going to bring, so it's pointless to worry about that. Live in the present, and enjoy the good memories you have. Even if you think life is bad now, someone somewhere does have it worse, and things will get better. This was very good.
I really enjoyed this poem. I very much agree that you should live in the present, the past happened and you can't change it, and it's pointless to worry about something that hasn't even happened yet. This is a great poem and it's very nicely written. :)
Having the advantage of "hindsight" is nice but we are all human - the ever mysterious "They" say perfect is 'boring' ...and seems everyone listens to "Them".
In the real Nhescey, we search for someone that we trust will catch us - and sometimes they will and other times they occasionally miss or we miss. Don't let anger and disappointments let your lips say things that can't be forgiven unless YOU really don't want forgiveness. And just because you can forgive... doesn't mean you might ever forget an IT was said.
I hope a person can live what you write... it's a worthy dream.
Quite a life you got there, just one thing, never regret anything because at one point it made you happy or you wanted to do it it just builds on to your character showing you are who you are, it's a reason why you are you. Great job though :)
Hi, I'm Nhescey Llower.
I'm 16.
I'm one of 5 kids. My older brother, Calum, is 20, my older sister, Macaria, is 18, my younger brother, Tatum, is 15, and my younger sister, Taliah, is 14. I'm righ.. more..