The cycle

Something I wrote while travelling between Bristol Temple Meads and Swansea on the train. During a quiet moment of contemplation.

Existence is nothing without survival.

Survival is nothing without battle. 

Battle is a consequence of existence. 

These are a consequence of life.

Author's Note

Not sure if this good, bad or confusing.
Give me a review so I have an idea of where to take it.

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

I loved the lines -
"Survival is nothing without battle.
Battle is a consequence of existence. "

How true. Every major step in live is a battle that makes "survival" a set of small isolated battles. Battles are indeed consequences of our existence. Without existence, there is no battle to be in. In fact, all battles are not meant to be won. Some are just meant to be "present in".

I loved the brevity and thought-provoking nature of this one. Good job.

[Hannah Morgan]

Thank you so much. Sometimes I have these short poem ideas and I am never sure if they will make sense outside of my own mind. You have really given me confidence with these style of poems.
Thank you again. You have made my day.