"Her"

What I want him to think.

Your voice is burned into my soul.

Your eyes appear in every image I paint
.
My perspective on everything worth reason is changed.

Forever I will search the crowd for you;

maybe one day I will get the courage to say hi.

But for now your being doesn't know me yet.

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[just Penny]

I like the concept of this, especially the twist in the end. It's different and interesting. Enjoyed reading your poem :)