Rough Drafting a Song I'm Writing

Rough Drafting a Song I'm Writing

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors
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I just need to get it on an actual page instead of 'notes' on my iTouch.

"

Here r the verses that have about 23 beats. The long ones. Haven't decided between that and short:

 

I want my world to crack open with the power of love and lust combined.

When we come together it's a sight that's elegant yet so unrefined.

I love how perfectly we both fell into Cupid's hidden design.

All those dark, sleepless nights I was pining and now just look. You are mine.

 

Then there's a simple chorus:

You're gonna be the death of me.

This, this I know.

But oh, what a way to go!

An overdose of ecstacy.

 

Then I tried simpler verses to pair with it:

Just one look from you makes my pulse jump in my veins.

Keep on working your magic, it's slowly driving me insane.

 

Then I fell asleep I'll work on it later today or tommorow. :) g'night.

© 2009 Mercury Mirrors


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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

Pensacola, FL



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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..

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A Poem by Mercury Mirrors