Rough Drafting a Song I'm WritingA Poem by Mercury MirrorsI just need to get it on an actual page instead of 'notes' on my iTouch.Here r the verses that have about 23 beats. The long ones. Haven't decided between that and short:
I want my world to crack open with the power of love and lust combined. When we come together it's a sight that's elegant yet so unrefined. I love how perfectly we both fell into Cupid's hidden design. All those dark, sleepless nights I was pining and now just look. You are mine.
Then there's a simple chorus: You're gonna be the death of me. This, this I know. But oh, what a way to go! An overdose of ecstacy.
Then I tried simpler verses to pair with it: Just one look from you makes my pulse jump in my veins. Keep on working your magic, it's slowly driving me insane.
Then I fell asleep I'll work on it later today or tommorow. :) g'night. © 2009 Mercury Mirrors |
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Added on November 2, 2009 AuthorMercury MirrorsPensacola, FLAboutOkay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..Writing
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