Psycho Fun.

 

Running with scissors.
And sprinting with machetes.
Shredding people's brains.
So it looks like speghetti.

We're on a murder spree.
Mothers, fathers, and kids.
They're all the same to us.
As we bash in they're heads.

Slit throats like sprinklers.
We're in an ocean of red.
We're making a raft.
Out of the bodies of the dead.

Using someone's skin.
As a sail on our boat.
Building a castle of bones.
We'll use the blood for the moat.

Reviews

[Boogieman Alzalaus]

Been A Long Time Since I Read Your Work. :P Makes Me Miss The Poetry Youd Always Write. One Day However, You And I Shall have To Do A Piece Together. -shrugs- Whenever You See This, You Should Hit Me Up. We Dont Talk Anymore. >.>'''' Avoidance Shall Only Get You Into Trouble Young One. Lol JK Anyways, Nice Work. XD Peace!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

WOw!!! i freakin' loved this!!! XD

The anger, detail, flow.... the whole thing, just, genius!!! I could feel the excitement as i read it...makes me want to kill someone, but i could neer do it :'(

cheers!

~may

[ATG]

This was disturbing, but very good. I liked it. It was a little unnerving. It was very well written and it was a very good read.

[Doctor Deathstab]

Sweet little dreadful short. Gruesome, exotic, and vivid.

[Flame DM]

very graphic and definately written in the character's voice XD.

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