Make You Love Me.

Idk.

 

There's no words to explain.
How it feels to say your name.
Tingling down to my soul.
You've stitched up all my holes.

 

Will it ever make sense?
I'm no longer on the fence.
I'm all yours now, heart and all.
Just promise you won't let me fall.

 

I've never ever felt this way.
Thinking about someone all day.
Other thoughts try to push through.
But all I care about is you...

 

I've never needed someone so much.
My knees never gave out from a touch.
Until I saw you standing there.
There's no one like you anywhere.

 

I don't care if you don't like me.
Just pull me to you, hold me tightly.
Never let go of this feeling.
That look in your eyes sends me reeling.

 

You don't love me now but you will.
You'll never get tired, never get your fill.
And you'll be by my side forever.
Staying forever, and straying never.

Reviews

[shoaib]

a really beautiful piece
congrats on getting the guy
cool !

[Mercury Mirrors]

thanks may. and i got him! i did! happy ending right?

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

I can't believe no one's read this yet... i like to read your psycho and love poems best, idk, i guess i just relate to them better. Anyways, another poem carved from love, another masterpiece :) If only we all could say exactly how we feel, and make it sound this good.

two thumbs up :D

~may