My Disaster.

To my love...

 

He's my undead angel, my villainous master.
My zombie man, my ballstic disatser.
When I get near him my heart races faster.
My sanity chips away like old plaster.

He's draped in sadness and shadowed in pain.
He brings with him thunder, and lightning, and rain.
His soul is as black as a sticky ink stain.
He's my very existence and my terrible bane.

He's the sun to me, and the moon as well.
He's heaven to me, and at the same time hell.
He could summon me with just the ring of a bell.
He's like a priceless treasure I'll  never sell.

 

But he walks alone, and he doesn't see me.
Wandering, pondering lost in insanity.
With his head in the clouds he hears not my plea.
So I watch him, can't touch him, drowning in misery.

Author's Note

it's my first time with my muse back, so b nice.

Reviews

[augustus]

Sad though it is, it's an enjoyable read.

[Distant horizons]

excellent. sad and a little bit something else. thanks for sharing

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[quill of shadows]

i gess ilooked more into this poem then last time but i feel u i think now and i know what u meen sometimes its the people you care about most that bring the most heart ach and pain

[Dutch Jr.]

Great, great metaphors and comparisons in this one. It really brings your articulation to life.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

you have an beautiful talent, this is one of my faves

[quill of shadows]

though this is more of a love poem its my style i like it alot iv been trying to write more and be more active on the site

[Boogieman Alzalaus]

Second Stanza, Third Line Down. You Put "As" And "Is" Together No Space........ OCD KILLS FOOL!!!!!! Please Fix It? It Ish Bothering Me!!!!!!!! Lol

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

That was so romantic, sweet, sad and so much more! i just love how you can pack emotions into all your poems. Then the reader can truly see how you feel ;) Really awesome write! You should be published.

~may

[Ravenskald]

a very nice poem
i dropped by
just checking wjo my first friends on here were