Chewing Wires

Chewing Wires

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors
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Erotica.

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I'm chewing wires.
Nibbling your core.
Electrifying fire.
I want more and more.
Blowing circuit breakers out.
Burning blackened to a crisp
Put your mouth on my mouth.
Suck my tongue and bite my lips.

 

© 2008 Mercury Mirrors


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Mercury Mirrors
Not very good my muse is missing.

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ATG
This was pretty good. I liked it. It was very well written even if the muse was missing. My only complaint is the color of the text. Yellow is not a good color. I could barely read it. I was only able to because my face was too close to the screen. Other than that, it was a good poem. Keep up the good work.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..

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A Poem by Mercury Mirrors