*Bloody Music Box.

*Bloody Music Box.

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors

 

Scarlet puddles on the floor.
She can’t have him anymore.
I gave up the life you stole.
To rot in this iron hole.
 
I can still hear the tinkling notes.
Mixed with her shrill screams.
As I was stabbing her in the throat.
His face still haunts me in my dreams.

© 2008 Mercury Mirrors


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very graphic, but beautifully detailed. great job

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this one you never sees to amaze me i cant help but feel your raage your saddness your jellosy, this is the s**t i live for sarry bout no comments latley havent been on in a bit

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the rhyme in this and the imagery that you have displayed in this powerful piece.... very nicely done!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

Pensacola, FL



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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..

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A Poem by Mercury Mirrors