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Unfinished. Just saving this stanza & seeing where I can take it from here. I wanna make another song.

 

Black kiss marks on your face.

Crimson blood on ebony lace.

Don’t get off, get on my case.

And grind to the beat of this bass.

Reviews

[The Grammar Nazi]

Wow. The "!" caught my eye, and I had no choice but to read this..Lol. Short, but it's great.

[Colleen C Dunphy]

Beautiful, I love the line "Crimson blood on ebony lace"
I can't wait to see where you take this.

Best,
Lee

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

that was so short, but it was awesome. i can't really explain why i was entertained by it, but good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!