Breakdown.

:[ Just a little peeky into my world. :)?

 

Each step I take my back might break.

Under the weight of a predestined fate.

I’m doomed to a life of phonies & fakes.

Treated like an animal locked in a crate.

My heart hurts like someone hammered in a steak.

Throbbing & choking, past its expiration date.

The air is so thick it feels like drowning in a lake.

But in reality I’m drowning in a world made of hate.

How can we live with ourselves when this is all that we make?

Reviews

[kollaboratyve]

Good poem!!! Symbols,rhythm,sound,imagery-nice work and you have the makings of powerful poet

[satanic666]

i love it its my favorite poem ever i feel exactly the same way

[Bev]

Short, almost wish it was longer but full of feeling and definately felt what you were saying. Thanks for sharing.

~Bev