*Whips And Chains. [Song.]

Wooo Im bein a horny little girl I was listening to Bloodhound Gang: The Bad Touch...And I got inspired :D. This is going on my CD. And I took out the chorus for now till I find a new one!

Just kiss my lips with duct tape.

And embrace my frame with rope.

Tie back my hopes of escape.

As your hands begin to grope.

 

Now this is my idea of Twister.

Limbs tangled, both on the floor.

So hard the heat starts to blister.

Bite my tongue. Call me a w***e!

 

I want rug burn up my back.

Turn me over on my belly.

Give my bruised-up a*s a smack.

Juices spread on us like jelly.

 

Is it sweat or is it semen?
Honestly who gives a s**t!

Hit it like a horny demon.

Lick my neck & pinch my c**t.

 

My pulse pounding in my head.

Passion rising like a flame.

If I’m heaven, leave me dead.

This is my new favorite game.

 

My heart’s skipping like a CD.

Just might have a heartattack.

It’s torture how you play with me.

You’re throwing me right off my track.

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

Grin this is my second read of this, it makes me smile and laugh at the same time ! My gran thoght that the musical song "lets do it, lets fall inlove " was a bit racy. your modern version is down to "lets do it" .
Meanwhile back at the lyric/poem fun, catchy touches on the edge of erotica and fetish without being too explicit. It's important in some types of fantasy to keep it vague to allow the readers input ! I feel with work like this. The chorus hmm I'l have a go, and your right some of it doesn't work ..
The double whips * chains jars a bit. The rest is fine. A fun song about fun :)

"Make cry or make me scream.
I'll be the subject of your dream.
You wake me up to face & cream.
And soon we will be building steam

With all you've claimed
with whips and chains
Sheets of white now dark with stains.
Now the rails are hot enflamed ,
Slam me like a train. "

Hope thats of some use :
~raven

[darkgurl]

Cool song I think it sounds fine the way it is....Kim

[satanic666]

it seems like it "feels" right to me lol