Axe-Murderin

Unfinished! I hope to get around to finishing this soon. :} It looks to b gooood.

This change has got me a little frightened.

My thirst for blood of late has heightened.

I can’t stop thinking about this crazy crap.

I’m having a bit o’ bloody fun, old chap!

Your head can play chicken with my axe.

Your blood can seep into the sidewalk cracks.

Reviews

[Drow]

It seems a little too short. The poem's very well phrased but it seems like it's just a beginning that has more to come. I like the line "Your head can play chicken with my axe." it paints a bloody picture when paired with the last line.
Keep writing!