Here You Come Again

=/ max max max thats all my f*****g head ever says yet i dont need him in the least so y does he occupy my thoughts I can hear the damn amazing voice i luv him & i hate it yet u love it yet OMG GET OUT OF MY HEAD U HOT B*****D!

So here you come, you bring the clouds,

Heartbeats like thunder, deep & loud.

Driven on by passion like lightning bolts

Sharp, intense, one kiss makes my insides jolt.

 

So here you come again with all your love

Like a black, sexy angel crashed to Earth from above.

Wish you could stay a while, I’m in denial, why do you have to leave again?
I know that you’ll come back some day, I just wish I knew when.

Reviews

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

The first two lines had the same words rhymed in the last poem I reviewed. The first and third stanza had rhymes that have been used for decades. It was like drinking flat soda that magically got a little fizz then went flat again. This guy is making your work weak, and I say that as a friend.