Sun Vs Rain

Needs a new name. Im just posting it somewhere so i can get to it later to add to it. YES its about Max...shut up. :P

 

And just like that you disappeared

When the Sun came out & all the clouds cleared.

You went with them, vanished to thin air.

As the lights descends upon me, I’m thinking it’s not fair.

You call me your sunshine when you come to my dreams

Push the Nightmares aside & gently stifle my screams

Your sweet kisses can do more than any medicine could

But you still haven’t come back to me, I wish you would.

Every memory of you is of cool, refreshing rain, deep grey clouds.

Of sitting on your couch, my head on your shoulder, the silence so loud,

Looking out the window at the summer shower, nothing to say

The drops coming down hard, sparkling in the light of the day.

Reviews

[Phantom Heart]

It is really a great Idea sun vs. rain. I like how you formed this poem. This would be a good topic for a contest.

[Mysty Rayn]

Kudos on this write. Fantasic. Loved reading it.