Just Another Love Poem

He’s got black eyes like charred coal,

I look into them but I can’t see a soul.

It’s like staring right into a black hole,

His stare is swallowing me up whole.

I can’t move, I can’t breath, I can’t see around me.

The broken heart in my chest is beating so loudly.

Everything surrounding us is all a blur, it’s all cloudy.

The butterflies in my stomach are getting kinda rowdy.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

It's like looking into the eyes of a vampire! Way cool! Like falling under the
spell of some dark soulless creature to beautiful and way to seductive to
resisit! I really really like your poem! It reads well and flows smoothly! Excellent
descriptions! It sure captured me quick! Those black soulless eyes!

Tina