Deadly Game

I’m playing a deadly game,

With the bullet called life.

I play the Devil’s game,

With this blood-stained knife.

I’m betting my very soul,

For a little bit of fun.

By the end I might be filled with holes,

For playing with this gun.

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

very dark but catchy..... nice imagery and flow .... great job on this one...

[Tina Kline]

Wow! Very clever and very violent. It sounds a little like suicide or living
a careless lifestyle. But your poem has power to it and a strong
violent punch! I like this one too!

Tina