AnnaMarie

Just fiddling during a 5 hour car ride from Atlanta to Florida. :] this is the product of my boredom & motion sickness. XD Enjoy.

 

Supple, moist ebony lips, 

Full, curvaceous, perfect hips. 

Sharp crimson nails, 

That Caress soft skin pale. 

The neck of her worn black dress 

Shows off her ample chest. 

And a frayed red ribbon holds, 

Black hair that falls in liquid folds. 

Tiny feet make not a Sound, 

As AnnaMarie glides across the ground. 

She was the beauty of her city, 

She stood out as more than just pretty. 

Her homely sister, in a bout of jealousy, 

Ended the life of Anamarie. 

Restless, confused, and craving revenge, 

AnnaMarie's lost soul

 

wanders without end.

Reviews

[Legion]

This is pretty dark and well written. Reminds me of a song by Loreena McKennit off of her "The Mirror and the Mask" album. Can't remember the song title though. Good work.

[The Mad Prophet]

Cool. Mildly dark, and mildly attractive. You describe her/you in detail then kill off the main character. Very good, I apploud.