Die-Hard Romantic [Unfinished]

Die-Hard Romantic [Unfinished]

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors
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Actually I HAVE been this way since birth. I had my first kiss in kindergarten. XD & I dated every guy in my kindergarten class. I'm still like that xept I only have ONE bf now...but he & I rnt working out at ALL.

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I was the kind of little girl.
Who thought love was everything in the world.
Who had a boyfriend before I knew what it meant.
Playing the game of love was how all my time was spent.
When we played house I was always the wife.
This is how I’ve been raised for my entire life.
Now I know it’s not a magical fairytale.
If you leave your heart out for too long, it’s bound to go stale.

© 2008 Mercury Mirrors


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This is pretty good for an unfinished draft. Good job! And I fully understand everything in this poem... I have 2 friends going out, but I have a feeling that they're making a terrible decision. Beautiful Poem. You were able to rhyme very well :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Interesting. I want to read the finished draft. And i totally agree with the last line. That sums up a lot of relationships for me.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2008
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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

Pensacola, FL



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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..

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A Poem by Mercury Mirrors