Our Love

This was written in the wake of the biggest fight Richie & I've ever had....I don't want to go into detail but I fixed it...& here's how grateful I am ^^. Enjoy.

I can’t even focus enough to write!

I’ve been thinking about you all night.

We fight so much about stupid stuff,

But in the end our love is enough.

 

We may not get along exactly well,

But this is still heaven, even in hell.

I wouldn’t change a thing about you,

And I know you feel the same way too.

 

I love the way you laugh, & just your voice.

I’d listen to you talk all day, if I had a choice.

Your words from days ago still ring in my ears,
You make me feel content, & erase all my fears.

 

I feel so relaxed yet on needles & pins,

When you kiss me, I can feel my head spin.

You’ve lit a raging wildfire in my heart.

You’ll be the one I hold onto as the world falls apart.

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

A lovely poem! I really enjoyed this. The emotional input behind this is impressive. I loved the flow and the general scheme of it, as well as the subject matter! Really interesting and powerful. Keep up the good work!

[D Poet K]

the last line and the first two lines in the second paragraph were my favorite parts. lovely

[Jason]

Aww. very much love inspired!
good job
jason

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Ah, yes, I do hope he appreciates your understanding even in the wake of the biggest fight you have ever had. A lucky fellow indeed to find such a wonderful woman. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[SM Davis]

This is beautiful!!! Oh I do hope he appreciated it. It speaks highly of a love that is strong enough to weather the pain that sometimes comes between partners. Wittingly or not. Very well written!

[DIANA WILBANKS]

How you express this is beautiful..I loved it.I think your heart may have felt this way ,if not now it has,right?
well anyway it was touching, expressive and totally to the point.Congratulations on you win and God Bless!
Diana

[Rambling Prose]

This is an endearing paradox indeed; the war that rages in the depths of one who is in love. It's a gentle flow of heartfelt sentiments.

~nicely penned~

[Seriana]

Don't ya just love the whole love/hate thing sometimes? Sounds like you've got yourself a good one. I love the ending line, so fitting. Great piece!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely done. Well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah