Boys = LIERS

This is for YOU Don, I gave you everything & now you're making it look like I'M the bad guy...hey I'm not the one who took everyhing & then cheated & cheated until you had to leave to get away! & by then it was too late, i had too many con

I really hate to discriminate,

To spread anger & hate,

But I think something must be said,

For guys who think with their ‘lower head’.

 

It happened to me, it’s probably happened you,

They get into your pants with the old ‘I love YOU.’

Then they up & leave without a goodbye kiss,

Not caring if they hurt you or if they’ll be missed.

 

They drop you like you dropped your pants,

Get it done, & are out without a backward glance.

Girls are just playthings, two b***s & a hole,

For their amusement only, to dance upon a pole.

 

They’ll take your virginity & leave you bleeding on the bed,

Wondering what you did wrong & wishing you were dead.

Don’t let yourself be fooled by a hot body & baby blue eyes,

They’re only looking for one thing, don’t fall into their lies.

Reviews

[Damon Ross Cottrell]

Your poem stirs within me a certain concern for the future of the males of this species. I've know too many boys like that think that way, but trust me in this, not are are that way. It's just not taught to boys anymore that they should grow up to be gentlemen. Nowadays, most boys aren't taught anything which is why they never grow into men at all. The breed of boy that becomes a man is becoming a dying species.

I think your poem depicts the fate of the girl who has fallen in with the typical guy very graphically.

[ehschick]

wow that is so good.alot of guys are .like that to girls and it wrong

[Ruby Moon]

"Not caring if they hurt you of if they'll be missed."
maybe you meant "Not caring if they hurt you [or] if they'll be missed." ?
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just wondering
i think that not all guys are like that, in fact i know a handful that is not like that
but i agree that most of them are like that
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[Sunrise]

There are boys out there who have morals and respect for girls; in today's society they seem to be far away & few to be found. But believe in yourself, be true to yourself first & foremost, have respect for your body as well as your feelings. Have fun with life while you are a teenager and don't get wrapped up in what a boy wants, thereby losing what you want & need in the process. You will find the right boy one day; in the meantime, enjoy life. Life is too short to waste, wasting away heartbroken over a boy who's not worth it. Learn from your mistakes, don't let history repeat itself. You are very talented with your poetry, keep writing.
Love, Aunt Meg

[chris' girlfriend]

errrr guys can be so immature!!!
this poem reminds me of my ex boyfriend it is exactly like him.
good poem!
~dana