L-O-V-E

L-O-V-E

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors
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My first attempt at an acrostic...=/ yeah it probably sucks but I haven't really studied the form. I will though & post another one for this.

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Look into my eyes & mean it when you say you want

Only me, that no other vengeful vindictive, manipulative,

Vixen can destroy what we have created, conceived. An

Eternal world of bliss, lost in each other’s eyes.

© 2008 Mercury Mirrors


Author's Note

Mercury Mirrors
Go ahead, critique it. This one wasn't meant to be good, only for fun.

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it wasn't what i was expecting from an acrostic poem.
but i liked it

Posted 16 Years Ago


dark yet seductive love i loved it,,wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2008
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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

Pensacola, FL



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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i.. more..

Writing
ily. ily.

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors